so an improvement i guess on my current, i will do my best tone it down, i find it quite hard to do..but i'll try.
Like said above imo its a bit overbrightened and also its missing some contrast.. I agree in some cases it can be hard to change those things after the tag is done, but in this case it should be possible, good luck and if you get stuck feel free to PM me i will try to help you as much as i can.