I love this one. I like the whole idea on how he is coming out of the crowded background. The only thing that kills for me is that there is no real lighting for it. Maybe you don't need any or yeah..Oh and try to bring out the Asian dude a little like use the dodge to focus more on him. First time my eye went on him but now I am having a hard time staying on him. Overall I love the colours, blur, contrasting composition and focal. Oh and get rid of the text it takes away from main focal. Zain.