Just Breathe;

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  1. nitrx

    nitrx Well-Known Member

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    <div align="center">Latest, i like it
    will probably use for crew league unless i make something better sometime soon

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    c&c please!!</div>
     
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    Nice depth and lighting on it but the right side bother me a bit though
     
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    yea i had a c4d there but i deleted that because it was too chaotic, maybe i should have kept it ha
     
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    Unlike the Look Away one I am liking this one.

    Like Drave said the right side kind of bothers me as well. Seems like something is missing there or something was taken out. Kind of distorted. Overall, I like the lighting and the depth of the tag.

    As for which version, I would go with Version 1 because the more orange clothing of the render you show, it attracts the viewer's attention. That way you take away attention from right hand side to left hand side which is good.

    Zain.
     
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    the right side looks weird, and that wire frame doesnt look right either.
     
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    I don't like the wireframe, it doesn't fit this tag imo. Also the effects are a little messy and there needs to be some more depth. Darken up the right side a lot and the far left a little.
     
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    I like it except the smudge on the left its looks messy
     
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