I think the render and the background don't match. First, you didn't blend the render with the background and the colors don't come nicely together. The flow isn't that great too, but that's because the background doesn't help what you tried to accomplish with the c4d But don't misunderstand me, I'm only making a contructive criticism After you try to develop a little better in the tags the concepts I've numbered, the results will improve ^^ I look foward to rate more of your work so keep posting that's only my opinion though. I'm not that great myself
