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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Paulie, Nov 20, 2008.

  1. Nov 20, 2008 at 6:25 PM #1
    Paulie

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    C&C please! >.<

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  2. Nov 20, 2008 at 6:58 PM #2
    [.BC.] Dr. Pepsi

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    love the background a LOT, but the text is awful D:

    i say remove the text and add in a few necromorphs in the BG. ;0
     
  3. Nov 20, 2008 at 7:01 PM #3
    Slywolf

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    You should loose the text and try to blend the render with the background a little bit more :)
     
  4. Nov 20, 2008 at 8:02 PM #4
    Neoteric

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    Get rid of the typo completely and work on blending the render. The background looks nice.
     
  5. Nov 20, 2008 at 8:20 PM #5
    .Arkane

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    you put the text exactly where you shouldnt. thsoe are focals and your covering em up.
     
  6. Nov 20, 2008 at 8:46 PM #6
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    my eyes are drawn to the text ont he left more than anything, try using a smaller more subtle font as as said above blend the render into the background a little. other than the text and that, magnificent.
     
  7. Nov 20, 2008 at 9:31 PM #7
    Paulie

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  8. Nov 21, 2008 at 8:31 AM #8
    Paulie

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    Anybody? I need more comments. :(
     
  9. Nov 21, 2008 at 9:21 AM #9
    vasili08

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    sweet background, but text is bad. blend him in a little and it'll be hawt.
     
  10. Nov 21, 2008 at 9:40 AM #10
    .Arkane

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    You dont put the text in focal places. put it all the way to the right in the corner, a more subtle part of the sig. the paulie just is random still
     

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