More than likely , not many will be able to see the sprite as I can not even see it that well myself. I may have made it a bit too messy, lol.
Thanks for the comment. I just hope its not too bright. My monitor makes everything seem dark, so I can't really tell if it's dark enough.
The smudging is pretty boring on the left. The right side is very busy but looks pretty good; maybe move some of that over to the left. The sprite is way too blended in there and doesn't take the place of the focal; the text does. You should probably get rid of it or move it to the left in that empty space.
its messy.. but the color combo really gives a very creative feel to it.. try to work on bringing the focal out and tone done a little those striking fx.. its a good piece mate..
first 3 are too messy last is better because the neg space is gone. add some contrast and it looks crispy ?