Killzone Sig

I personally think this is my best by far:




Questions and comments would be appreciated! ^_^

 

Any comments?

 

mmm its alright
leave text out it is bad :/
bit simple try and work some effects in

 

It's cool. Could use more effectz though. lol

 

Kill the text.

Add more effects.

Perhaps a c4d?

 

Needs more effects, all I see is a smudged render for a background, and an unsmudged render on top.

 

Lose the text, lessen the lighting and add some contrast.

 

make text alot smaller, dim the light its ok but yeah needs work hehe