Dj Dess

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by JackSkeleton, Nov 13, 2008.

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  1. JackSkeleton

    JackSkeleton Well-Known Member

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    Havent been making much so im a little rusty... What you guys think?

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    v6
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    CnC???
     
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    smex bro :D v3 my fav awesome depth to it
     
  3. JackSkeleton

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    Sweet, I thought it was depth-less almost. didnt try to add any. Iv never been too good with depth...
     
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    v4 looks great to me and i love them great work :)
     
  5. JackSkeleton

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    I need to work in photoshop more before i loose mah skillz...
     
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    v1 is hot.

    Get rid of the soft brushing behind the render, it looks a bit weird right now. Add a foreground light source, there isn't one right now.
     
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    fourth is hot, maybe sharpen the render a tad bit.
     
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    Alright so tried it and changed and added some things. I think it needs less lightening now, ill fix that later.

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    You've over-sharpened it to the left of the render. The newest version is the worst with the bunch, just keep editing v1, the colors were a lot better then. And yeah, the lighting is way too much now.
     
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    try taking out the lights , you have to make it "solid" use 100% brush screened. besides soft
     
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    nice but the shapes look a little LQ
     
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    Alright heres another.

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    Any more suggestions?
     
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