Sdoty 2 -- 2008 (discussion / Entries Feedback)

I'm scared. =(

 

what should i change or make a new one?

different to most of the others, work on the text more though m8 or just use 'tub'

poor broken :lol:

 

Broken Why the hell are you scared '

I should be scared.

Tubby that is cool and different as Pulse stated. Needs work on text.

Zain.

 

I'm struggling to do, anything at the moment.
This so far ;



And I hate it. >.>

 

It's um..decent. But I am really not feeling anything there. The composition is OK I guess, but the text kills. And Lighting is off IMO..

Did you render the stock or just used it as it was?

Zain.

 

TBH Pulse i like it a lot especially v1,think its very unique and different

@broken i think the only bit letting it down atm is the bottom part the top half is coolio

@Tubby nice entry but yeah agree with the other work on the text m8,good and origial use of the stock.

 

Thanks for comments guys
Pulse I think all the circles are off putting. It kinda wrecks the render.
Broken its alright but to much chaos going on

 

Neuron has some issues with this forum as we all know. So I'm Posting and Submitting on his behalf.

His Entry:



Looks Cool..

My Entry: Jump In

Since no one helped me render the stock, I had to do it myself <_<. I just used the magic eraser so it was easy Anyhow...everything is done by me. I had a wee bit help from Neuron which was the touch-up. The Text / Straight Line C4D next to leg and pink glow comes from him

Tag --



Large Artwork --



Tell me what you guys think about Neo's and Mine.

Zain.

 

Anyone want to comment on my entry :\

 

I didn't even see this until now Zain.

Love Neuron's.

Really like yours too Zain. ESP the LP.

 

Thanks for the Love Rena <3

I'll put the LP in the Signatures Section once the battles are up later today or tomorrow!

Zain.

 

Not sure...on both, admittedly.
Think Neuron's would be a hawt LP but not sure on it as a tag, granted it's fairly original, and will probaly sail him through to the next round.
Same issue with yours Zain, prefer the LP to the tag by quite a bit.

However, it's significantly better then my entry so...
You're through =p

 

I told Neuron to make it an LP but he didn't do it!

Mine I love the LP but not the tag that much.

You do realize you have about 2 hours before the time is up so you can make a better one.

Zain.

 

I submitted another entry I've not posted here.
Problem is it's so cliche, creative-wise I can't think of a damn thing.
But we'll see. ^^ Good luck eh? =]

 

I hope you win

I'm not good at this stuff anyways.

Zain.