Large Artwork Section Annoys Me

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Renagade, Nov 11, 2008.

  1. Renagade

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    Interesting piece there Rena

    I love the scales you have around her eyes for eyeshadow, really makes you focus on her nice eyes

    But the bubble stock is too obvious and the blending doesn't work here

    and there's two big bubbles that have red on them that really takes away from the focal
     
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    have to agree with pink here the blending really dosnt look... well realistic

    and the pond with the fish in i (between the eyes look nice)
    but the one down the bottom looks out of place

    still nice work :)
    i like the atmosphere it gives
     
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    They are bubbles with fish in them.

    I didn't really want to put blue fish in them because it'd be a bit too monotoned. The only reason I put fish was due to the Pisces theme.

    Thanks for the comments.
     
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    I don't really like the 2 dark circles near her eyes but the rest looks great to me.. keep up the good work
     
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    Ahh I see now
     
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    Anymore comments?
     
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    its fuxxed up as hell.
    but its great dude

    i might have placed the things near her eyes differently though.
     
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    looks great man but i think you need to sharpen the eyes a bit, and blurr those "fish bubbles".
     

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