Gears Of War-realism ?

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  1. Siatek^

    Siatek^ Well-Known Member

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    hey guys i made this recently. ive been whoring realism....or well trying to lol
    tell me what i can do with this to spice it up
    v1
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    v2 - Bigger stock BG. no blank left side
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    v3-to get rid of the brightness on his face...and bit of dodge on right side
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    v4- tad more blended (render to bg)
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    v5 - hopefully nailed it here
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    -SiateK
     
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    awesome, however imo the left side looks a little empty mabye moving the stock a little to the right would be great (if it's big enough ofc) the lighting and depth is great and you aced the colouring, gj :) keep it up
     
  3. Siatek^

    Siatek^ Well-Known Member

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    i see what you mean.
    ill see what i can sprouce up. a tonne of applied images.
    EDIT: nah man i cant. unless i make it bigger ( the stock) and restart
    Any more comments?
    thanks guys
     
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    looks good but the lightning is off.. you see orange light on the render but there isnt a orange lightsource..

    so OR make the light on the render a different color OR add some orange light. but gj on the rest
     
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    This. Though you said you cant, and thats a bummer =(

    Awesome stuff though dude. I really like it. And I dont like much =P
     
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    Siatek^ Well-Known Member

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    This. Though you said you cant, and thats a bummer =(

    Awesome stuff though dude. I really like it. And I dont like much =P
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    Well im not saying i cant coz i can do it.
    I can take the filters of this sig and remake it without the left side.
    then i can also fix up the orangeness that robin pointed out
    ill see what i can do :D
    ill post it here, give u a message or something

    -SiateK
     
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    gud stuff bro, loving each piece more and more keep it up :P
     
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    thanks for comments.
    any more ?new versions Added
     
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    V4 is awesome, though one thing. The larger stock looks much better, filling out the empty space on the left side splendidly.

    Also, the brushed part over the original bright lighting on his face, lower the opacity a tiny bit. It's a tad too obvious now =P
     
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    Siatek^ Well-Known Member

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    thanks zekiel :D
    i tried to burn it. but it wont fade so i had to brush it.....cant lower the opac that much either or it will show thru.
    lol
    but heres what i got
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    Work on coloring, I'm no realism expert myself but with the colors you have going on it can't be realistic. So try and have more natural and toned down colors in realism pieces or else they won't be realistic
    kiu though ;)
     
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    Siatek^ Well-Known Member

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    thanks pink. i kinda get what you mean. but then again the world does have many colours....anythign could be realistic
    show me ur sig with that FF13 stock
    lol
     
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    v5 is my fav!!
    nicely done bro
     
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    yw
    oh and it's posted mate :) Serenity's Presence comment it hehe
     
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    Perfect dude! v5 it is!

    Nice work ;]
     

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