C&c Please?

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Osm, Nov 12, 2008.

  1. Osm

    Osm Member

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    This is my third signature I've made, a friend a few days ago taught me the basics and showed me some tutorials and I mashed a few of em together to get this.

    Please be completely honest as I am looking for criticism as I want to improve.


    Thank you. :)

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  2. Ad4m

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    Your text is overall ok, However the right side is way to blurry. Try erasing SOME of the blur over the effects.

    for your third signature I think it's really nice.
     
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    For a third signature, that's excellet. Next looks good, as is placed well. Normally people can spend ages doing design and never quite grasp text, but yours is quite good.

    Also, its got good depth and composition, lightings nice and colours are excellent. Keep up the good work.
     
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    Yea it looks great for your third, but things you need to improve on, blurring. You dont need to over blurred to create depth usually its just a good balance of lighting and dodging and burning layers, also if your going to blur try and make it more gradual so it does end abruptly.

    Other than that just keep making sigs until you start creating your own style.
     
  5. Osm

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    thank you very much for the comments


    when i get home from school tomorrow I'll work on another one and post it up and I'll try to work on what you guys said.
     
  6. chipmunk2k5

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    amazing third siggy, but yah fix that blur on the right tone it down a bit :P
     
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    for a 3rd sig that is tight dude! i agree about the blurring on the right but the text i personally feel is amazing :)
     
  8. Osm

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    took what you said about the blur into consideration, i had it fixed before, but deleted the layers to fix a previous problem and forgot to erase when I re-did it :)


    here's is v2

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    that's sweet for your third ;) however i can't see any difference between the 2, either that or im partially blind T_T
     
  10. Zekiel

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    Pretty insane stuff for your third signature ever..

    Keep it up man ;]
     

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