Wow, you guys are vicious. But the tag isn't your best here Zainx, the main thing that bugs me is the lighting on the render. There is a weird inner glow on him, but I like the text.
I wasn't trying to be vicious, hence why I kept apologizing as I tore his ass apart. I really just wanted to let him know I expected a lot more from him and I hope his next tag can meet my expectations.
they aint too bad dude its jsut for me personally its a bit hard to tell whats going on in the background, nice tho