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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Prince Zainx, Nov 12, 2008.

  1. Prince Zainx

    Prince Zainx The Dark Prince

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    Here is my Multiple Render.

    Colour:
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    B/W:
    [​IMG]

    V3:
    [​IMG]

    V4:
    [​IMG]

    Which one to enter? or don't enter either?

    Comments & Critiques Please.

    Zain.
     
  2. SuvivoR

    SuvivoR Well-Known Member

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    black and white makes the blending look better :)
     
  3. Prince Zainx

    Prince Zainx The Dark Prince

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    Thanks.

    Added V3 (different text). V4 (more lighting).

    Tell me which one to enter or shall I make another entry :P

    Zain.
     
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    inverse Banned from GR

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    Blending as a whole is pretty terrible TBH. There's some kind of inner glow type thing going on with the render, and even with the black and white, it still makes it look like the render was added on with paint. Try using the burn tool to sort that out. Also, it's nowhere near dynamic enough for black and white, so I'd recommend you sort out some kind of colouring, because you've got two distinctly different colour palettes for the render and background. Also, you couldn't have picked a more boring stock for the background.
     
  5. Prince Zainx

    Prince Zainx The Dark Prince

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    Wow.

    Way to keep it personal.

    If you want to do it then go ahead, be my guest and get a better background to work in. This is my first realism tag as I've never done any in the past. Calm down your senses dude, you don't want me to be angry ...

    Zain.
     
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    inverse Banned from GR

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    Hahah, you think I'm attacking you?
     
  7. Prince Zainx

    Prince Zainx The Dark Prince

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    It sounds like it from the what you wrote.

    My bad if I thought you were.

    Z.
     
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    inverse Banned from GR

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    I just wrote what I thought was wrong with the tag. I believe this is called C&C.
     
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    b/w with text is lookin good man.. i think the concept is nice juz the render is kinda not blended well, i mean the tone..
    its an easy tweak and im sure it will turn badass if tweaked.. great tag bro! :)
     
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    V3 is best.
     
  11. Prince Zainx

    Prince Zainx The Dark Prince

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    Thanks :)

    What tweak would you suggest Wolf?

    Zain.
     
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    mantis33 Banned from GR

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    Tbh with you Zainx, this is terrible. I mean... come on... it looks like you started making tags just yesterday. The renders look completely slapped on. I expect so much more from you, being in AG and everything.

    I know this is harsh, but... I don't know... I just expect wayyyy more.
     
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    Prince Zainx The Dark Prince

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    ...Fine I'll close this thread.

    I was just experimenting with a different style. It looks great on my other tag that I made. Guess this one just took the whole style downhill. As FYI it is not a stock slapped on a BG with some lighting, it has 26 layers on it :P

    My next tag won't disappoint you Mantis.

    Zain.
     
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    Hehehe ironic, as the only tags Mantis can make are generic realism.
     
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    Ironic that you're not good, but pretend to be.
     

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