Just a bit of a random throw-together. Its probably a work in progress although I think it has the potential to be way better. Need some help with that part though.
Nice flow and effects man but seems to crowded and rough. Maybe darken up the left hand side a bit and lighten the focal Good Job
the c4d on the shoulder doesnt look right something about the flow looks strange good concept i see what your trying to accomplish but its just not there yet
