actually imo the text isn't that bad lol although there is room for improvement, however the render needs more blending, effects are nice gj anyway
lol, everyone has different taste. mabye make text smaller, but keep the same sort of style and also mabye the render could be moved to the right a little see what you can do
the render needs blended.. the text sucks imo sorry to disagree and you need some more effects but its an okay start
not really like the style of the text render not really blend looks plain why not try to add more stuff on the right side or try to move the render more to the middle