Abstractplosion

Another new tag, was experimenting with different coloured c4d's and thought it turn out pretty good. Threw in a render for more sexyness, tell me what you guys think

 

Looks good to me.
very nice colors, but the stuff on the right takes a bit away from the focal (either her face or the tits I guess )

 

xD rofl

thanks ryu, was a little lazt and couldn't be arsed to fix the right side, dunno mabye ill do something about it. tell me if you guys want a text version, since i thought it wouldn't suit it that much

 

It's an okay sig, but the focal point is all off. Its more to the right then then the girl.

 

kk, thanks. it did kinda look weird to me at first - mabye ill upload an edited version if i can be bothered
any more comments?

 

The insane amount of different colors take away from the focal point.

 

>.< mabye ill try blurring around the girl, post v2 in a bit

 

i like the color variation it looks nice.. and the depth seems great everywhere but the render... and the render isnt that well blended imo.. also the bubble look on the top left not liking that =x to fine of a line for me

 

ok, cool i'll see if i can improve thx for comments all, appreciate it

 

only thing i dont like in this, is that stronge pink light next to her head,

loving the efx, and the over all feel you have,
keep it up bro

 

thanks, i'll see if i can tone it down a little

appreciate all the comments

 

i think the pink curving line on the left takes away the focus the most. but this looks great

 

thanks