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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Nilogic, Nov 9, 2008.

  1. Nov 9, 2008 at 12:30 PM #1
    Nilogic

    Nilogic Well-Known Member

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    [​IMG]

    i like it :)
     
  2. Nov 9, 2008 at 12:32 PM #2
    G35

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    It's very flat.
     
  3. Nov 9, 2008 at 1:43 PM #3
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    No flow. It's kinda bland.
     
  4. Nov 9, 2008 at 2:00 PM #4
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    yeah, and the greyish bit on left doesn't go well imo
     
  5. Nov 9, 2008 at 2:02 PM #5
    steez

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    the blending is just awful
     
  6. Nov 9, 2008 at 2:06 PM #6
    SM Ciel

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    Work on the text.
     
  7. Nov 9, 2008 at 2:26 PM #7
    chipmunk2k5

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    the blending is decent, you are getting there bro.. the colors need work and it is flat try blurring the background sharpening the focal and take out the burn tool / dodge tool if ya need
     
  8. Nov 9, 2008 at 6:02 PM #8
    Nilogic

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    thx for the comments first try with this style and its a stock so idk how to blend it :P
     
  9. Nov 9, 2008 at 6:18 PM #9
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    my fav tools of all, are burn/dodge.

    it is a tad flat,
    but you are moving in the right direction my friend :)
     

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