Mike S

cnc

 

I think you need to add some effects and work on your text.

Try reading some tutorials.

 

what effects specifically?

 

try doing something with the background, seems to me like a render on a background.

blend the render in using tools such as smudging, bluring and sharpening.

lighting is ok

 

thx, yea i think im missing some smudging effects. ill have to mess around with some smudge tuts.

 

agreed with alien.. it seems a lot boring and smudging not so nice and text needs a lot of work though it is decently placed..

 

mmm dont use text when starting out best advice ever!

um yeah read some tuts and work on effects