Laotm

Entered for Large Artwork for the month


V2!

 

bottom half is sexy..
that c4d thing at the top, just dosent fit in...

 

I'm in agreement with dragon. Everything looks great except for the meteor. And I suppose that blue planet on the right breaks the flow of color. Too much cyan in a spot that should be neutral. Other than those two things, I like it. Great composition, great colors, liking the perspective. Nice work

 

The starfield and the lack of transition between the pitch black and orange kill it for me.

 

nice work on the bottom half but the comet is too bright / overcontrasted

 

awww and i like that c4d on the comet, i thought it looked so good. maybe a bit just too bright

 

the bottom section is so well done,

the top bit just seems to not fit,
both in color and size and contrast...

 

changed that to orangy...

added V2, darked it so theres no more black to orange

 

Lose the c4d; use smoke and fire instead.