Size is GIGANTIC, so I can see why it was hard to work with. Text should be closer to the focal [in most cases the person]. If you would have included a stock or render I would have been able to tell what you did, so it would be easier to comment. Also needs more contrast. Could use a black and white gradient map set to luminosity.
I think it looks great but to see the stock would make it easier for me to cnc ya the size is also an issue with me
here you go [: render: http://i448.photobucket.com/albums/qq202/I...mGR/2420guy.png bg: http://i448.photobucket.com/albums/qq202/I...ng_by_Wilso.jpg