Sotw Entry

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  1. Oct 31, 2008 at 1:46 AM #1
    Tub a Wub

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    Hey here is my SOTW entry
    What you guys think?

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  2. Oct 31, 2008 at 6:25 AM #2
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    best concept ive seen.

    depth is lacking though
     
  3. Oct 31, 2008 at 6:28 AM #3
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    Ok thanks how can i fix or improve it?
     
  4. Oct 31, 2008 at 6:42 AM #4
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    usually to add depth i burn (not too much) objects that are farther away while slightly dodging objects closer up.

    in this case i would just slightly burn the city and see how it looks from there.
     
  5. Oct 31, 2008 at 7:53 AM #5
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    looks pretty real
    whats the theme
    and yeah maybe darken some of the creases on his trousers with the burn tool and the shadows of buildings to create a lil more depth
     
  6. Oct 31, 2008 at 8:23 AM #6
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    nice concept m8
     
  7. Oct 31, 2008 at 11:30 AM #7
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    Looks good.

    Agreed with others, you need to darken the city in the bg a little and lighten up the mood in the foreground.

    Z.
     
  8. Oct 31, 2008 at 12:03 PM #8
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    1st Person View. ;o
     
  9. Oct 31, 2008 at 1:29 PM #9
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    Also, blur the bottom parts.

    Not too much blur, just enough to create depth.
     
  10. Oct 31, 2008 at 7:00 PM #10
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    Ok thanks for all the input guys :)
     
  11. Oct 31, 2008 at 8:10 PM #11
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    Great concept. Maybe Photo Filter or a black and white gradient map set on multiply with a low opacity will help you also. Definitely can be a great piece just mess around with it.
     
  12. Nov 3, 2008 at 9:07 PM #12
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    heres mine

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  13. Nov 3, 2008 at 10:15 PM #13
    Tub a Wub

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    I like it Pulse but whats the stuff too the left? Smoke?
     
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