The Killing //

alright heres my entry. I dont think its good at all, but all i could come up with. i think the right part is good but i need some advise on the left side. should i keep it liek this, put another finger or two and keep it dark? its suppose to be a guy covering his face with his hand and peering through a door.

 

I think that is very clever and very well done except I think if your trying to do a guy covering his face it needs to me a bit more executed? Or you good have him peering through the door. Anyways its well done Beo

 

ya thx for the comment i jsut dont no what to put on the left

 

I think you should remove the hand idea and put in a door?

 

ok ill try it

 

I personally think its great. I wouldn't change a thing really.

 

Yer i think top 3 for sotw

 

which version?

 

Probally v2 for me

 

V2 fo' sho'.
It's hot Beo, I'd darken the blood a bit though if you can and maybe a bit more, splattery.

Really good idea though. Like said, should place Top 3. ^^