Bullet for my Valent? Not really a fan of the colours, pink doesn't go with it. Text is "ok". Those random lines circling around him need removing, or making white.
I like the version 1 Black and The version 2. The pen tool in the first one looks horrible around the knee. =\ But I like the style you were doing.
style looks alright i like version 3 better though and as for making a tutorial, only if you want to teach people about splatter brushes imo =x good sig toward the end though (love the band )