Need to remove those white spots, and darken the far right (there's a light edge). Otherwise quite like it, except the white.
I think v2 looks better but the blackness on the right side is kind of abrupt and i think it needs to fade a little better
I like it alot, v2 cause i like how there is the black contrast on the right, it gives an organic kind of feel and some depth. I would really like to learn to do a style like this.