u damn rite shes = perfection! there are two text position mate and they are both kinda drifting away from the focal which is a big no no cause text is kinda like creating another focal.. besides thats its all warm mate
put it in more of a better place so it doesn't drag attention (closer to the render) if you make the text smaller by like 10 px on every side and move it to her right shoulder a little over it then it would be better imo