F A I L New Version

- v1

- v2

cnc please.. tried that new halo 3 tut thats in paid tutorials and lol the instructions made little to no sense at all. I made a lot of tweaks and my own little things here and there and came out with a sig that is actually viewable.. should have seen it before I tweaked it lol

anyways cnc

 

That looks like sub-zero I really like the text and effects on it

 

God no on the text.

Rule 1/
Never Bevel Text.
Ever.
EVER.

Right, now that's over.
It's ok, render seems faded out a bit by the light over the top of it ; fade the light so it's brighter at the top but not there towards the better. Get rid of the text, maybe do some colour work with Photo Filters etc. to blend the render in a bit, the orange/blue's not subtle enough.

 

needs depth, way too faded work on that

 

Needs some depth and the render should be blended in more...scratch the text.

 

- v2

thanks for comments tried to use a new version.. so cnc?

 

still not workin man, faded, maybe its the render? take it those are beams of light on him, if so body needs to be darker

 

Colors do not go well together. It honestly looks like you make your tag without regard of color then throw a bunch of adjustment layers on it at the end.

 

i think the main probably is the lighting, for mine ( i may not be the best so don't quote me on this) i find where my light source is going to be then using some lighter colors from my sig i play airbrushes around the light source and on the focal where the light source affects it. I try to use different setting on my layers like overlay and soft like, and i try lots of different ways to get it right. Just keep working on different ways until you find whats best for you.

 

k thanks for the comments

and falcon havent seen a render sig from you at all just those c4d things that are getting really old =/ and half of those suck with the color so lol to ya

 

omg dont even go there... he is just trying to help you... and he is a 100 times better then you....

 

fight fight fight? nah its true hes only trying to help, anyway version 2 looks much better, i really like the underwater effect, but theres no depth to the render

 

lol never said he wasn't better just said i haven't seen a rendered sig... flip out much kid? and its not even you lol... i know he's tryin to help... but hey falcon at least you know you got a yes man now lmfao.. "yes master"

 

Its ok but there's just no depth and the splatter effect all over the place is not right at all.

 

Chipmunk.
Shut up, people's own tags aren't a factor in what comments they have the ability to make. Make a thread in Last Word if you want to do it.

V2's an improvement. Just not massively, liked the orange actually but it needed to be throughout the tag as opposed to just over the render. Like someone keeps saying, the render has a faded light effect over the top of it (that blue) which is taking over the black and killing any depth. Needs to be sorted. BUUUURN IT