Reaching

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by yogurt, Oct 30, 2008.

  1. Oct 30, 2008 at 10:49 PM #1
    yogurt

    yogurt Well-Known Member

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    I didn't really know what to do with this week besides a realism type.

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    V2
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    V3
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    CnC?
     
  2. Oct 31, 2008 at 12:15 AM #2
    blckinfi

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    i cant read the text very well.
    maybe change the color ( i like the placement)
     
  3. Oct 31, 2008 at 12:36 AM #3
    AG Cliche

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    Looks good, but the placement of the arm seems off to me.

    Looks to me like the arm should me placed up higher and more even with the wall on the right, seeing how the arm is straight out meaning it should be almost even with the guys head.

    Text looks good to me.
     
  4. Oct 31, 2008 at 12:40 AM #4
    Neuron

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    I agree with Cliche.

    Also, color correct the arm so it corresponds to it's environment.

    I think hue/saturation would work easily here to fix it.
     
  5. Oct 31, 2008 at 12:42 AM #5
    yogurt

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    Ah, I see what you mean, thanks for the comments.
     
  6. Oct 31, 2008 at 12:57 AM #6
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    Very unique. Good job.
     
  7. Oct 31, 2008 at 7:46 AM #7
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    V3 so far definetely.
    Still think the arm needs to be coloured more like Neuron said, doesn't really reflect the atmosphere it's in.
    It's good though, although from how I see it it's not reaching it looks more like he's falling, (Especially as it's down a corridor)

    'Tis good though.
     
  8. Oct 31, 2008 at 10:30 AM #8
    chipmunk2k5

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    it's unique good job, but I think the arm looks a little awkward =x and the text needs some work

    dunno how to fix the arm though lol
     

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