that red blur on the left its huge and it throws me off on depth so much.. as big as it is makes it seem like its infront of the render but then its blurred and the render is sharpened.. =x
It looks like it can be really good, i just think that whatever is at the foreground needs too be less blurred so it is easier to tell what it is.
I think I'd like it more if it was maybe 20-30 px shorter on the bottom. Nice effects though, and I like the flow of it. It seems like the blob-ish thing is moving, so maybe do something more to show that. Just my opinion, and I do like this, just needs a bit more ^_^.
blur to the left could have had its opacity taken down so it looked more like smoke and so its less distracting
I said nothing about the focal bro. I said the depth. anyways the thing on the left needs to go, or be lowered opac or something... then it wouldnt be bad at all.. maybe shorten the height
what do you mean with this then? but it doesnt matter anyway because i hate the sig myself and i know its crap..
lol robin if don't quote part of me... the other part was "that red blur on the left its huge and it throws me off on depth so much" then i did that sentence.. and if you read the first sentence it says i am talking about depth not focal..