Comment Please

Here 's my entry so far.. It's mostly done but would like some comments on it so far



V2


V3

 

I don't like the yellow smudging around that bright part. Also I don't like those lines.
but I like the c4d's in the bg

 

Thanks

V2 added
Tried to remove smudging, darkened it in some areas and attempted to put some text

 

Are we allowed to post our entries considering there is a public vote?

 

only team members and staff/admins
can see this section, so if you wish you can post your work for c&c

 

So is the tag good?

 

i find it hard to comment,
since its not my style...

wish i could help more

 

V3 added

 

v3 text is much much better
but its to far away from the focal..

 

v3 text is the best but place it next to her shoulder under the yellow line
other than that i really can't find anything that you could improve