Monkey!

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Z.A.R, Oct 25, 2008.

  1. Oct 25, 2008 at 4:13 PM #1
    Z.A.R

    Z.A.R Well-Known Member

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    Good C&C please!
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  2. Oct 26, 2008 at 12:25 AM #2
    Z.A.R

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    Bumpity*
     
  3. Oct 26, 2008 at 1:44 AM #3
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    make it flow just a lil more.
    the bg is random and it looks like the monkey is floating.
     
  4. Oct 28, 2008 at 12:28 AM #4
    Z.A.R

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    Yeah the bg is random. I actually tried to make the monkey look like moving away from the light source. It kinda gave it an eerie effect IMO.

    Thanks for the comments guys. More C&C please!
     
  5. Oct 28, 2008 at 12:52 AM #5
    chipmunk2k5

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    i think it looks good even with the random bg lol but i think theres a lot of empty space and no render blending =x
     
  6. Oct 28, 2008 at 12:58 AM #6
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    Too much contrast and bad text.
     
  7. Oct 29, 2008 at 10:27 PM #7
    Z.A.R

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    Too much contrast? You think it should be muddier/flatter? The whitest whites and the blackest blacks are not even showing in this one. . . What exactly do you mean too much contrast because that doesn't make any sense. Please elaborate.
     
  8. Oct 29, 2008 at 10:33 PM #8
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    too much contrast towards middle, scattered and random fx, colours arent good
     

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