Typography

I really like this one...
plz CnC ^^

 

it looks like a nice background but the text doesnt really look that well with typography it looks like black bolded arial overlayed >.< work a bit more on the text.. it isnt horrible just doesn't look like that much

 

kk, thx for commenting

 

I like, nice and straightfoward.

 

thanks ^^
anymore CnC?

 

damn, sorry about double post

edit: c'mon, anyone? any critics, hints on what to improve?

 

hints to improve umm.. I don't know what you were going for but this kind of looks like a rock under water with text on the rock.. if thats what you were going for you kinda nailed it.. looking at it again I dont think the text is as horrible as I thought before.. =x