first off.. you gave about 38 minutes for someone to comment... at 6:09 in the morning? you don't need to bump that soon imo.... anyways.. background doesn't seem like it goes with the render and you have a lot of empty space the text takes away from the focal point even though you don't have much of one.. and the text needs a lot of work and the render isn't blended.. suggestions: blend the render, take away some width from the render imo 200 px or so.., work on the text, and match the background with the render.
Thanks for all your comments and its not 6.09 its like 12.09 and what do you mean by blend the render (I need Paint.Net instructions)
