Make The Attempt

be honest :|

what version is better?
and whats good and bad about it?
asking for all criticism.

thanks ppl hope you LOVE it :]

v1-

v2-

v3-

 

cool dood

 

v2 looks the nicest to me. Imo would be better without that green smudge next to his jeans.

 

v2 is the best imo, but the c4d is kinda random =/

 

i reckon this cld look great with some work.
the pen tooling doesnt seem to smooth and contradict each other a bit in terms of flow, especially near his right knee.
the c4d seems random and the bg a little low quality and i dont like the shadow.

i like it, v2 looks best IMO, like the yellow near his hands. I think this could be something special good work!