Dead Space Sotw

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by midnight, Oct 21, 2008.

  1. Oct 21, 2008 at 10:07 PM #1
    midnight

    midnight Well-Known Member

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    xD.. anyways, this is my entry for this weeks sotw, i would really like some c&c on it, you can be as harsh as you want, or you can sugarcoat all over the place, anway...

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  2. Oct 22, 2008 at 2:01 AM #2
    GRAF1CS

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    TOOK ME A WHILE TO DECIFER THE BACKGROUND FROM THE FOCAL PT, lighting needs work
     
  3. Oct 22, 2008 at 2:04 AM #3
    JackSkeleton

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    The focal is a bit not there, and the stock seems a bit too contrasted. pretty solid.
     
  4. Oct 22, 2008 at 7:50 AM #4
    lazytagger

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    try and add more focus on the character to pop it out
     
  5. Oct 22, 2008 at 7:55 AM #5
    AnythingPink

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    Kinda having a time making out the atmosphere.. Like I can't really tell what exactly is the surroundings around him and in the BG.
     

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