the chick is alright.. lol but it seems like she is to bright and glossy and the effects don't mix well with that background it also seems like you don't have much of a focal point the whole thing to bright imo though but i like darker sigs good job v1 is better
i agree with chip the chick is ... decent. i prefer ver1 coz shes less glossy/bright, maybe put the opacity down on the effects so it blends with the bg but overall nice try its slowly getting there just work on it