Gungrave

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by harkaan, Oct 17, 2008.

  1. Oct 17, 2008 at 8:22 PM #1
    harkaan

    harkaan Well-Known Member

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    Critique is appreciated muchly
    its different I know...I was just messin around
     
  2. Oct 19, 2008 at 10:00 AM #2
    chipmunk2k5

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    you don't really have good depth or light source on there and there is a lot of light sources scattered... thats all I got for this =/ looks alright though
     
  3. Oct 20, 2008 at 3:08 AM #3
    GRAF1CS

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    face needs to stand out more, too blurry, background is nice though.
     
  4. Oct 20, 2008 at 3:17 AM #4
    Siatek^

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    not really into this one.
    as chipmunk stated. the light source is scattered around both sides of the render. should be on one spot to make the render stand out. i feel that this render is part of the background itself. needs bit more depth, maybe a gradient map - black and white with low opacity. also. the Gungrave text is nice, the other however needs work. focal definetly needs darkening. maybe some reading of tuts to develop depth or something.
    keep it up man.
     

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