Falling Stars

Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by [.BC.] huMAC, Oct 19, 2008.

  1. [.BC.] huMAC

    [.BC.] huMAC Well-Known Member

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    "I made an LP version of my tag.
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    that looks great man, but blurr the white circles that are further away a bit, they look to sharp (only on the LP). also try to give them a glow or color or something, they look a bit boring atm, but i totally love the rest, great job
     
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    Looks ok. Furthest away falling thangs look good (Near the bright light).
    But the ones closest, the blurred ones don't really fit in, Seem to bright compared to the relative area + not really fitting in.
     
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    I'm in agreement with Broken. The ones up close need work. I also think that the ones at the very back could use a bit of work though.

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    They seem way too unrealistic. Don't get me wrong, I like it a lot, I'm just trying to be critical so you can improve on it. Beautiful concept, just work a bit more on execution. 8/10 at the moment.
     
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