Fire Ritual

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  1. Oct 17, 2008 at 5:54 AM #1
    Griebeltjes

    Griebeltjes Well-Known Member

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    Added v2 with some smoke and dust:
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    v3 not sure if it improved:
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    C&C appreciated
     
  2. Oct 17, 2008 at 6:53 AM #2
    chipmunk2k5

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    this looks amazing I would change the height a little shorter though imo but it looks good
     
  3. Oct 17, 2008 at 9:05 AM #3
    Griebeltjes

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    Added a V2
     
  4. Oct 17, 2008 at 9:06 AM #4
    Slasher

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    Lacking depth
     
  5. Oct 17, 2008 at 9:29 AM #5
    Griebeltjes

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    Yeah I tried to add depth but i got stuck because i didn't know how to do it thats why i think its not finished and I need some tips to finish it :D
     
  6. Oct 18, 2008 at 6:00 AM #6
    Griebeltjes

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    Lil' bump, still need some help to finish it :unsure:
     
  7. Oct 18, 2008 at 6:49 AM #7
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    i'm liking version 2 m8, only thing i would sort is the rather sharp are just under his wing on the right side theres a awful looking yellow area
     
  8. Oct 18, 2008 at 8:17 AM #8
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    looks great.... but again its flat-ish
    the color of the fire looks a bit washed out as well......
    maybe some gradient maps ? other than that awesum job
     
  9. Oct 18, 2008 at 10:28 AM #9
    Psvertjuh

    Psvertjuh NotYourMonkeyNotYourRobot

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    It's to chaotic imo, all the effects ruin the flow, colors aren't all the best also :x
     

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