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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by YashBhatt, Oct 11, 2008.

  1. YashBhatt

    YashBhatt Well-Known Member

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    Feedback Please !!
     
  2. duckieking

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    not sure how much of that is render/stock and how much would be your work ;)

    About the tag, flow feels great, maybe the big rosé thing takes away a bit too much attention
    Nice subtle lighting but text gets lost on the railings :/
     
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    Oof?
    It's a stock with some shapes.
    Text needs shifting behind her right leg as opposed to being lost like said. Also like said, blue rosey shape needs removed as it's not really helping it at all.

    Just a bit, boring.
     
  4. chipmunk2k5

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    I like it, looks good text needs a lot of work and I can't tell how much is render / stock and how much is work, but it looks good aside from the text.
     

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