|| Nasuul || "''future Failings, And A Blood Writ Dream"'''

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daaaamn! i love it man. used the render a lot better than in my sig. i just think the background is kinda too smokey, kinda blurry

 

thanks, but i really didnt want the background to be over powering if u know wat i mean... aimed at a ------ realistic tag here, tried not to overburden with effects, to portray a simple yet powerful result...

hope i achieved that

 

Nice, man. Love the depth and the coloring. Text could be better, though.

 

I love it looks great nice depth imo good text great job

 

thanks guys, looks like i havnt lost all my touch

 

It's a bit too blurry, needs to be a bit sharper.

 

not bad, just move typo out of focal

 

why sharper... it would distract from the focal....


thanks xed... yeh texts gonna be my worst bit to get good at again... not that i was good ever at typography lololol.

 

Problem being the focal isn't the render, the focal is the bright spot which domineers the whole tag.
Text isn't bad, if anything it's its redeeming factor as there's not much in the way of depth, needs some form of shadow being cast from the render.
The yellow thing on his right shoulder is a bit off-putting too.

It's not bad, just needs work.

 

thankyou very much for the in depth reply broken, and i see what u mean.

as i said this is my first in months, im a bit rusty lol.