v1 and maybe add some of your awesome text the white seems a little plain but at the same time i like it so idk maybe try and do something with that?
If that's a clipping mask on his cheek (or anything not from the stock), get rid of it. It looks weird. Very good though. v3
I see what hes talking about there is also a line on the guys nose that you might want to get rid of and i agree with him nice catch abyss