Xed, still going strong i see, havnt got the time for deep CnC mate, but quickly i will say it looks great. ill give u some deep cnc after my next shift, if u do the same when i post up my latest been away for so long...
it looks really nice but i think you should of made it more green cuz that smokey color kinda makes it boring?
cc: First off lemme start with colour as thats the biggest standout problem i see... the orange brown of the background clashes with the yellow green of the render, but also blends in as well. I would try to either create more of a contrast of colours, or go for one scheme... effects are great... Depth... yes theres great depth in this one, and i love the way u have created a foreground, background and mainground to the effects... but lighting... its so bright. With that much light there must be shadows as well... focus... now shadows again... tone down the edges bring in some sharper contrast to it, maybe even soft brush some black into it. When i look at it, my eyes dart all over the place and cannot quite find the focal point... anyway hope that helps. posted ma latest too bro should see more from me now. got single recently. more time to waste on the good ole things hehe.