Ma First C4d Lp

Discussion in 'GR Classic Archive' started by Robin, Oct 7, 2008.

  1. Oct 7, 2008 at 12:50 PM #1
    Robin

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  2. Oct 7, 2008 at 1:16 PM #2
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    Definatly needs better coloring.
    Depth is good.
    C4D looks great.

    Its pretty good
     
  3. Oct 7, 2008 at 4:43 PM #3
    steez

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    lighting and depth are sick
    nice usage of the c4d
     
  4. Oct 7, 2008 at 7:46 PM #4
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    Perspective could be improved a lot. Too much copy pasta in the background imo. Coloring needs work. And the focal placement needs work, its too ''in the middle'' right now.
     
  5. Oct 7, 2008 at 7:57 PM #5
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    Looks great Robin =D

    I agree with Captain Falcon here, too much copyapasta and the focal, I think its well defined just work on the colours

    Looks sick man
     

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