Nice, V2 imo. If the effects were just a little sharper farther away from the stock, just a little, it would look great.
the effects r ownage. The lighting is good. The only problem is the actual focal, i think it would look better if u just took it out. Added maybe some that would stand outmore. Something solid. Or just remove the spidey completely. Or make it stand out, and try to make it seem that u didnt just add spidey in there after and (soft brush) erased around him.