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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by .Statik, Oct 5, 2008.

  1. .Statik

    .Statik Well-Known Member

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    My attempt at realism, I know it fails hard but Ill keep trying, can i get some tips on how to improve it?

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    the guy is too blurred compared to the stripe thing in teh dead center.
     
  3. chipmunk2k5

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    I think you can do much better than this.. it looks like a render thrown on a blurred stock photo where's those effects that we all love? :eek:
     
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    lol that stripe is door

    and i wanted to try realism, even though its whored enough

    i made a third version think its best

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    any more comments?
     
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    3rd ftw, but I think the stock could be a bit bigger, its leaving alot of empty space cause of how detailed it is compared to the rest of the tag. The blurry foliage(?) in the foreground is kind of way out of place on the right side to me, try a sharper/different effect like building's support beam or something.

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    Also maybe move the stock closer to the door in the middle.
     
  7. chipmunk2k5

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    the third one is good to me looks well done no complaints
     

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