messing around with a style that i really like may not be the best but whatever its something =] ver. 2: ver. 3:
I'll definitely hand you originality. I don't think i have ever really seen much like this before. But nothing really blends either so it isn't much of a beauty to look at. Keep working with that though, I really love the idea.
need a better focal, i cant really tell what the big red thing is. Id probably make it smaller, so get rid of alot of the space from the side.