Heh this stock sure has been getting around lately lol I suggest trying to execute the effects in a better way. They seem low quality and just need work.
They seem faded to me.. Maybe needs some contrasting. Tags on GR actually come out lighter and less contrasted when posted on GR, which is why I have to always add a little contrasting just so the quality looks as good as in CS2 as it would look here
Text blows it for me. Kinda disrupts the whole piece. Colors aren't bad. Her fingers are way too sharp. I agree with Pink, needs better effects executed better.
i wouldnt have necessarily removed the effects around her head, just branched off from them. Run a sharp on the effects and they'd be better. and some particles.