To be frank M8 Not liking it,The whole tag is too blurred The border doesn't go too well as well as the text But i really appreciate your try,GJ
way to many versions imo.. but.. if i had to choose a fav it would be v4 they all need text work and the sig seems way to bright and has no focal point also no depth and the render isn't blended read some more tuts you will get there soon bro
lotsof things could be better like mentioned before but your main problem is the blurrines of the render