There really should be a focal but I cant see one. The thing on the right is completely overpowering your signature, and it also looks low grade. The B/W version is defiantly not working for this time of signature. Colors dont seem to agree. I like the original stock I would try remaking this signature without the huge thing on the right and see what you get
the left side of v2 is hawt, but the right side is just wrong somehow, id just put like a tree there and blurr it lol something like that to create depth
ya I agree with statik the left side is all good but the right isn't =x also I like the colored one more